Test Submission: Bronx Bad End?

WARNING - This is a NSFW game with the following themes:

Ryona, Vore, Tentacles, Asphyxiation, Strangulation, and Implied Potential Death.

Do not download this if you don't like the above themes!

This is essentially just a test submission, but I figured that a lil' start is a start.

This is a free, super short VN executable with 2 pictures, some flavor text, a save and load function, and the rest is either unfinished or unpolished. No sound, no effects, just something simple to try out. Be sure to read the readme.txt for some guides on smaller solutions on getting stuck.

So download away! This is for windows only, though a Mac export can be possible if requested.

What I wish to get feedback on:

• The writing, if it's too cheesy or if there are a lot of grammar errors.
• The art, does it add up? How many more variations would align the action better with the flavor text/story?
• If it was up to you, should future VN projects be CYOA-styled or just full-on novels?
• Does it even run properly on your computer?

You're doing me a huge favor if you answer these questions after going through the game.